Illusion

Jaibala/ April 11, 2016/ Poetry/ 18 comments

Just like the bright sunny day, suddenly shadows cloud

Darkness  fills the emptiness, vapours vessels shroud,

 Understanding, Affection, Compassion,

Dullness, desperation, abjection

Everything is real, still all a delusion,

Sometimes illusions and confusion

The shroud of cloud; real or imagination, Illusion is real, or reality is an Illusion

 

Some things I cannot control,

It is safer to go along with the spiral roll

You say it is not real; you say it isn’t true,

I just want to be heard by you

An opinion, a word, a neigh if you may

It just might brighten a cloudy day,

The calm in the ocean, what you can’t see,

Let me find the strength again to be me

The shroud of cloud; real or imagination, Illusion is real, or reality is an Illusion

 

I know you won’t, you don’t understand,

All the turmoil that won’t let me stand,

A truth beyond and a cry within reason,

A sudden inexplicable change of seasons,

A surge of contentment,

The bleakness of abasement,

The shroud of cloud; real or imagination, Illusion is real, or reality is an Illusion

About Jaibala

Academically a Microbiologist, I am a Web Columnist for popular magazines and websites, Freelance Writer and a Blogger. Words define me and writing and reading compete to be the love of my life. My biggest belief is that there is something good in everything and I always looks to highlight the best in things. Creative writing is my forte.You can reach me by dropping a mail at contact@jaibalarao.com

18 Comments

  1. To the point and very meaningful. I don’t know what to say!
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    1. Thank You 🙂

  2. That was perfect Jai!!
    Could very well relate to quite a few lines… poignant and powerful.

    1. I knew you would Pix 🙂 Thank so much

  3. The repetition has an effective impact for this topic!!

    1. I thought this form would lend very well to this topic.

  4. Excellent writing.
    ZQ

  5. This is so beautifully emotive and wise 🙂

    1. Thank You so much 🙂

  6. 🙂 No further comments. You know whY 🙂
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  7. “An opinion, a word, a neigh if you may / It just might brighten a cloudy day,”….this is so true….

    1. Welcome to MSoT, and thank you so much for reading. I is always a pleasure when a reader connects with your writing.

  8. I agree. Depression is such that one moment every thing might seem well, but then, the next moment it feels like every thing that is wrong in the world is in our world, and the right things are but illusions.
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    1. Sometimes everything is just a blurry haze, reality, illusions everything

  9. Let me find the strength again to be me! RESONATES. This is beautiful and moving. And I don’t know about reality or illusions, but good friends last for life. XX 🙂

    1. Hugs Aarti. True friends do last for a lifetime and sometimes many lifetimes 🙂 Thank You so much

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