Lost

Jaibala/ September 5, 2016/ Poetry/ 63 comments

Everyday a war we wage

With destiny we fight

Forgive errors, control rage

Put together, over might

What’s meant to be, forever lost

Heartache filled with frost,

What’s meant to be…

What’s meant to be…

A daily war, a destiny costs.

You said that we had forever,

All for one, friends together,

Until that line you sever,

The only thing we had as tether

A silent tear I cry, I won’t ask why

To you my heart seems spry

A silent tear I cry…

A silent tear I cry…

And I won’t wave goodbye,

How did I forget that hearts break?

Faith in you only adds the pain,

 I see you, there is only an ache

We cannot go back, can’t begin again

I’ll stand alone, for all you have caused,

If only to think, you would have paused,

I’ll stand alone…

I’ll stand alone…

And know that heartache can’t be uncaused

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About Jaibala

Academically a Microbiologist, I am a Web Columnist for popular magazines and websites, Freelance Writer and a Blogger. Words define me and writing and reading compete to be the love of my life. My biggest belief is that there is something good in everything and I always looks to highlight the best in things. Creative writing is my forte.You can reach me by dropping a mail at contact@jaibalarao.com

63 Comments

  1. The depth.
    The reality.
    And the way it relates to us deep down.

    That’s what I have to tell reading this.
    Fan of your writes 🙂
    & learning a lot from you 🙂

    1. Oh Sam, Thank You so much. I humbly accept this compliment. As for learning, we all learn something from each other. Thanks once again.

  2. This is an exact state of my mind today. 🙁
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    1. Hope you are feeling better

  3. Poems are your thing! They are!
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    1. Hehe, I am beginning to believe they are too

  4. This is such a heartfelt one, loved it and can so relate. I can’t describe how much I am glad to have connected to you, Jai. 🙂 Hugs
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    1. Thank You Ashu, and I am so glad to have connected with you. Hugs back

  5. Your word touched my heart so deep..
    Loved the magic u created with words
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    1. Thank You so much. Means a lot.

  6. A powerful and touching post. You deserve an award for this level of writing.

    1. This comment just made my day. Thank You so much

  7. Heart touching words .. spell bound by your magic 🙂

    1. Thank You so much 🙂

  8. Beautiful poetry Jay! This is the reality with many friendships today!
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    1. Thank You Reema, sad but true most of most friendships, it is all hollow once the surface is scratched.

  9. Very touching. I had written a poem along the same lines. There are moments when such pieces come up. They come from our heart .

    1. They actually do, these kind of pieces actually write themselves.

  10. Everday a war we wage and Heartache can’t be uncaused, Beautiful string of words! A lot of thoughts ran through my mind while i read this piece. Incredible!!

    1. Thank You so much Rashmi 🙂

  11. Touched,
    and so I end my words !!

    🙂

    1. Oh My Thank You So Much!!!

  12. A very soft and hear felt poem about the inner wars we wage

    1. Thank You so much Amrita

  13. Faith in you only adds the pain – liked this line. Amazing poem. I would love to read more from you.

    1. Thank You so much 🙂

  14. So many thoughts ran through my mind as I read this Jai – life isn’t easy, and losing friends hurts. But you need to stand up and you need to move ahead. Love! xx
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  15. Life can be tough … but it’s all right, we can jump back and move on … probably with different dreams, different friends, and more strength. A great poem, absolutely loved the ending line.
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    1. True Raj, we can always move on while the old stands still. Probably derive more strength from letting go in such cases.

  16. Wow!! What a poignant poem. Somewhere deep down a silent tear I cry… So true!

    1. Thank You Rohan. It is always the case 🙂

  17. Yes, everyday is a war we wage, either within our own minds or worrying about the iniquities of life. A mind at turbulence with life’s unfairness, so beautifully essayed!
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    1. Thank You so much Kala. It is that isn’t it, our mind turbulent always and life is unfair always. And we as people always expect that things will remain exactly the same.

  18. Beautiful. Loved the lines “A daily war, a destiny costs.”

    1. Thank You Aditi, thank You so much 🙂

    1. Thank You Ruchi 🙂

  19. Beautifully composed Jai Maam!
    A daily war, a lifetime’s cost,
    from friendships lost to the hardships love caused.
    Such is the journey one must walk,
    always remembering,
    that even fire can kindle within the frost,
    of a cold brutal world that’s lost.
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    1. There is nothing left to say after that, you have summed it up so well Omkar. Thank You so much for this wonderful comment 🙂

      1. It’s a poetic tribute to your poetry in the form of a reply 🙂

        1. And your verse was so good that it summed up my poem so perfectly. Thank You

  20. Beautifuly penned ..loved the poem!

    1. Thank You Deepa 🙂

  21. ‘A daily war, destiny costs’ loved this line! Such beautiful and remarkable flow of words Jai! I love your poems so much!

    Cheers
    Geets

    1. Thank You so much Geetika 🙂

  22. This is such a poignant poem,Jai. I loved most of the lines here. They are so meaningful and powerful. 🙂
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    1. Thank You so much Ramya. Its always so wonderful when people connect with what you write 🙂

  23. Beautifully written. You’ve so nicely described how we live with our sentiments.

    1. Thank You Atul 🙂

  24. Beautiful poem, Jai! Loved the way you presented the sentiments thru this verse 🙂
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    1. Thank You Saumy. 🙂

  25. “heartache can’t be uncaused” Oh wow, Jai!! 😀

    Brilliant flow of words and yes, you might be my favorite poet in the blogosphere.
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    1. How much ever we may wish, none f us can undo things. I think people must realise that before acting. Also this might be the best compliment ever, because it comes from you 🙂

  26. the daily battle does seem to take a toll, but it’s one we have to wage. maybe it’s because each person has their own war, that we can only focus on our wars at times. there is faith in the other person to hold on, but we can’t really know how long or how hard their war is. unless they sever the cord than hold on, perhaps it’s possible to begin again if needed. I’d like to believe so, at least.

    1. True each has their own wars and they might be focusing on that. But that works both ways, and every action has some consequences. I don’t believe that things can be back exactly the same, and even if they do begin again equations change I think its normal and natural, because all of us grow from our experiences.

  27. That’s the character of a strong woman.
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    1. Yes it is, Thank You Tina 🙂

  28. You are a super talented woman Jai. Loved this poem. Lets have some more

    1. Thank You Anindya 🙂

  29. Don’t we all go through this sometime or the other in life? Brilliant poem. It’s so poignant.
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    1. We all do, and still people expect us to behave as if things will remain unchanged. Thank You so much 🙂

  30. Beautiful words, beautiful sentiments

    1. Thank You 🙂

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