Love Unsaid

Jaibala/ September 18, 2016/ Short Stories/ 30 comments

Nisha looked at the couple sitting next to them. She longed to have that kind of freedom someday. She longed to show the one she loved how much she cared.
Mahi was trying to ward off the attention of the guy flirting with her. She wasnโ€™t interested; her heart was set on someone else for a really long time.
Mahi and Nisha had grown up together and were the best of friends. They had also been in love forever. If only their affection was understood, then they could be who they were, two people in love.

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Academically a Microbiologist, I am a Web Columnist for popular magazines and websites, Freelance Writer and a Blogger. Words define me and writing and reading compete to be the love of my life. My biggest belief is that there is something good in everything and I always looks to highlight the best in things. Creative writing is my forte.You can reach me by dropping a mail at contact@jaibalarao.com

30 Comments

  1. Such a nice story .So many emotions expressed in so few words.
    Only if people understood the truth about live we would all be happier
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    1. Thank You Amrita, so true if only people realised the truth about love being universal, so many issues would be avoided.

  2. Nice work. In less than 100 words that too.
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    1. Thank You Sid ๐Ÿ™‚

  3. We would need a very mature society to understand love between same sex couples. But I guess we are growing … look at Ellen and Portia ๐Ÿ™‚ Well written
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    1. True Raj. Thank you

  4. Working with a word limit, I’d say this turned out very well. It said a lot in little, and it made me think. I’d say that’s successful. Maybe you can experiment with a longer piece on the same theme too. ๐Ÿ™‚
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    1. Yes maybe I should try to write a longer piece, that seems to be the consensus.

  5. Love has no boundaries but it is not boundaryless either. It still depends a lot on how society accept such relationships. That’s a wonderful micro fiction you wrote, Jai! ๐Ÿ™‚
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    1. True Saumy, love should in itself be without bounds though. Thank You so much ๐Ÿ™‚

  6. The way you have expressed it in less than 100 words, truely amazing!
    Looking forward for more.
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    1. Thank You Rashmi ๐Ÿ™‚

  7. Love – the purest of things. Yet there are so many conditions attached to it. It’s really sad that in this day and age, with all the progress society has made, people still think they have to right to dictate who we can and cannot love!
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    1. So true Shinjini, people do not realise that the heart wants what it does and they cannot interfere in others personal matters.

  8. I haven’t ever tried my hand at micro fiction or microblog and I admire how you or others convey an entire story in less than 100 words at times ๐Ÿ™‚
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    1. Thank You Prerna, you should try it sometime, it is great exercise for the brain.

  9. Isn’t love in any form better than hate? When will people come to terms with this? Beautifully done Jai!
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    1. Love is always better than hate.Thank you Kala ๐Ÿ™‚

  10. Liked how you have explained it all in this microfiction. “Love and non acceptance” ๐Ÿ™‚

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    1. Thank You Deepa ๐Ÿ™‚

  11. Two peope in love ..
    Enjoyed reading this microblog ๐Ÿ™‚
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    1. Thank You so much Dixita ๐Ÿ™‚

  12. That’s sad. Unfortunately we have a long way to go before love like their’s finds acceptance.
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    1. True, we do have a long way to go, until their love finds acceptance. Right now we are dealing with this kid of love leading to death and suicides.

  13. That was heart-tugging ..
    yes, love should always be realized ๐Ÿ™‚
    beautifully penned Jai

    1. Thank You so much Pix, so good to see you here ๐Ÿ™‚

  14. When you think about it, the show FRIENDS had a young lesbian couple (Ross’ wife & her lover) in the very first episode. And that was in 1994. They even got married a few seasons later.
    How sad is it that we have finished 22 years since that day and we still cannot even express such an emotion, let alone showcase it in public.
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    1. So True Doc. It is such a sad state of affairs, that two people in love cannot be looked as as just that, Two people in love.

  15. A short piece. It conveys a lot ๐Ÿ™‚ But then, even though this is a microfiction. A little more on their love and longing could have brought much more to this piece ๐Ÿ™‚ (or so I think) Cheers.

    1. Thank you so much for the Feedback Shanx. I will try and write it that way. ๐Ÿ™‚

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