My New Song

Jaibala/ August 30, 2015/ Poetry/ 28 comments

Hey, This is my first post from a my own space. Yes, I have gone self hosted. The past two weeks have been wonderful, with so many good things happening. But most of the times when you achieve something, it is not you alone but the support and the belief of at least one person whose faith in you never wavers. This is a poem for that person. The form is Rondel, again with a repeating line. I love these formats.


I am writing a new song,

That you sing with me

For when the end I could not see,

You saw the line, you heard that song

The song I sing all day long

It made me see, made me believe,

I am writing a new song,

That you sing with me

The road, though winding and long,

The path treading mystery,

Never have I been lonely,

When I have you to sing along

I am writing a new song.

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About Jaibala

Academically a Microbiologist, I am a Web Columnist for popular magazines and websites, Freelance Writer and a Blogger. Words define me and writing and reading compete to be the love of my life. My biggest belief is that there is something good in everything and I always looks to highlight the best in things. Creative writing is my forte.You can reach me by dropping a mail at contact@jaibalarao.com

28 Comments

  1. Lovely lines, Jaibala. And fab new look. πŸ™‚
    Vinitha recently posted…And off he goes..My Profile

    1. Thank You Vinitha πŸ™‚

  2. Congratulations πŸ™‚ πŸ™‚ That’s such a sweet song you’ve written. Perfect way to tell your new space, “you’re home already” πŸ™‚ πŸ™‚ Cheers.

    1. Thank You πŸ˜€

  3. Congratulations on going self hosted Jaibala.. it’s truly overwhelming to know for yourself. All the very best on this new space. And the poem above is really sweet and simple πŸ™‚

    Cheers
    Geets recently posted…Reflections- AugustMy Profile

    1. Thanks Geetika. It is overwhelming and exciting. Glad you liked the poem πŸ™‚

  4. Lovely poem Jai… All the best for the new beginning, hope to see many more of your good, great writing in the future. πŸ™‚ Loads of love…
    Fathima recently posted…The Heart Within Me β€” My Future Magic…My Profile

    1. Thanks Fathi for your best wishes <3

  5. Hey – This looks fantastic. Such a neat work. Awesome. Sid just mentioned this morning and he was right. Such good work on this. πŸ™‚
    Parul recently posted…#MicroblogMondays – There’s nice ring to it..My Profile

    1. Thank You Parul. πŸ™‚ It was so much fun getting my own space.

  6. Cheers to your new song in your new space Jaibala. Way to go.
    Beat About the Book recently posted…Making a Case for the GrinchMy Profile

    1. Thank You so much Tulika πŸ™‚

  7. I have been thinking of self hosting for a long time… but never got around doing it. Absolutely loved your song… so full of life and joy πŸ™‚
    Rajlakshmi recently posted…Zen…tangled !!My Profile

    1. Going self hosted was an absolute fun experience. You must do it soon. So glad that you liked the Song πŸ™‚

  8. Oh ho! Self-hosted. Congrats. The site looks nifty and professional. And congratulations on all the great things that are happening to you. You deserve them, of course. I liked the poem too.
    Rachna recently posted…My unmatched prowessMy Profile

    1. Thank You Rachna. πŸ™‚ You are awesome and a huge role model. So glad you liked the poem, I have tried to capture the recent events.
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  9. Many congratulations on going the self hosted way! And the lovely lines were just an apt opening to your new space. πŸ™‚
    Aditi recently posted…Postcards From ParisMy Profile

    1. Thanks Aditi. Yes I wrote about new beginnings, because the last two weeks have been just that for me πŸ™‚

  10. Nice! I like the new look of the house… I mean, blog πŸ™‚
    Roshan Radhakrishnan recently posted…My #Gratitude circle: August 2015My Profile

    1. Hehe It is our online house isn’t it? Thank You so much Doc πŸ™‚

  11. Many congratulations on going self hosted Jaibala. May it be the harbinger of all good things always πŸ™‚
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    1. Thank You GodMa. I was super excited about making this move πŸ™‚

  12. A beautiful poem. Just right for debuting the space. Happy to see it up and running at last πŸ™‚ waiting to read it much more regularly than of late. Congratulations Jb πŸ˜€ The space looks elegant.
    Vins recently posted…Book Review: The Secret Garden, by Frances Hodgson BurnettMy Profile

    1. Glad You like it Vins, The new space and the poem πŸ˜€

  13. You sure are lucky, Jaibala!
    Congrats for ‘your own space’ and this lovely song! πŸ™‚
    Shilpa Gupte recently posted…Bringing home a pet.My Profile

    1. Thank You Shipla πŸ™‚
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  14. Congrats on the new space, Jaibala. And it’s great that you have that one person (though I suspect the number is higher ) that you can count on.
    Sid recently posted…Mrs Funnybones : A non-reviewMy Profile

    1. Thank You Sid. I was going to say “You know who you are πŸ˜€

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