NaPoWriMo: Betrayal

Oh the prompt today for NaPoWriMo had me in.  ” A lune is a sort of English-language variation on the haiku, meant to better render the tone of the Japanese haiku than the standard 5-7-5 format we all learned (and maybe loved) in elementary school. There are a couple of variants on the lune form, but just to keep things simple, let’s try the version developed by Jack Collum. His version of the lune involves a three-line stanza. The first line has three words. The second line has five, and the third line has three. You can write a poem that consists of just one stanza, or link many lune-stanzas together into a unified poem. Happy writing! ” A Lune. I had never written such a short poem like ever before. So here goes my first ever attempt at a Lune.


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Photo Credit Loonylucifer at Devianart

BETRAYAL

The baby wailed,

Broken and battered she lay,

He walked away.


Listed below are my fellow NaPoWriMo Participants –

http://njsays.wordpress.com/ – Nirmal

http://juztamom.blogspot.in/ – Sfurti

http://janakinagraj.com/  – Janaki

http://poojashridhar.blogspot.in/ – Pooja

http://andiwrite.com/ – count

http://whilethecoffeebrews.blogspot.in/ –  Naina

http://ponderingtwo.blogspot.in/ – Rohan

http://advkaranshah.blogspot.in/ – Karan

http://www.rinzurajan.blogspot.in/ – Rinzu

http://artofleo.wordpress.com/blog/ – Vinay

http://eccentriccontemplations.wordpress.com/  – Nithya

http://viewsofpreethib.wordpress.com/ – Preeti

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