NaPoWriMo: Mona Lisa Smile

Jaibala/ April 1, 2014/ Poetry/ 15 comments

 

The First prompt for NaPoWriMo 2014 is an Ekphrastic Poem, and I choose The  Mona Lisa By Leonardo Da Vinci. The smiles on her face is so mysterious. This is the first time I am attempting one, so Here Goes,

MONA LISA SMILE

He said he was leaving,

He said it would be a while,

He said I should let go,

Cause the distance was more than miles,

He said it wont be easy,

He said he was being kind,

He said he had decided,

The best for us this time,

And all i could do was sit,

Be still and smile,

If only he knew what was going on in my mind,

Then he would solve the mystery of  Mona Lisa’s Smile.


Listed below are my fellow NaPoWriMo Participants – http://njsays.wordpress.com/ – Nirmal http://juztamom.blogspot.in/ – Sfurti http://janakinagraj.com/  – Janaki http://poojashridhar.blogspot.in/ – Pooja http://andiwrite.com/ – count http://ponderingtwo.blogspot.in/ – Rohan http://advkaranshah.blogspot.in/ – Karan http://www.rinzurajan.blogspot.in/ – Rinzu http://artofleo.wordpress.com/blog/ – Vinay http://eccentriccontemplations.wordpress.com/  – Nithya http://viewsofpreethib.wordpress.com/ – Preeti

About Jaibala

Academically a Microbiologist, I am a Web Columnist for popular magazines and websites, Freelance Writer and a Blogger. Words define me and writing and reading compete to be the love of my life. My biggest belief is that there is something good in everything and I always looks to highlight the best in things. Creative writing is my forte.You can reach me by dropping a mail at contact@jaibalarao.com

15 Comments

  1. i find it similar to my eeeee story!! 😛 😀 sad but good one!

  2. Because you were planning to kill him, right?! 😛

    1. Roshni more like slow torture 🙂

  3. Lovely Jaibala! I read it and read it once again. MonaLisa and her smile, mysterious at its best!

    1. Pooja Thank You very Much 🙂

  4. that was lovely 🙂

    1. Thank You 🙂

  5. Cool…loved this one.

    1. Janaki Thank you very much 🙂

  6. The Mona Lisa smile is one of the most mysterious smile and you have done a good job depicting it 🙂

    1. Thank You Rohan. Thank You So much. 🙂

  7. I really do like the way you’ve woven a different take here 🙂 <3

    1. Thank You Nirmal. Yep thought of all possible reasons for the smile 🙂

  8. Thank You….also coming from you “Nice Poem” is a huge compliment…but I wonder is there anything like just a smile 🙂

  9. I think I am one of the exception who don’t find Mona Lisa’s smile mysterious. For me, it’s just a smile. 🙂

    Nice poem, btw.

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