NaPoWriMo: My Happy Ending

Jaibala/ April 10, 2014/ Poetry/ 21 comments

The Prompt for the NaPoWriMo today was “take any random song play list (from your iPod, CO player, favorite radio station, Pandora or Spotify , etc.) and use the next five song titles on that randomized list in a poem.

Happy writing!” Here is my attempt.

This is dedicated to a friend who exasperated by my procrastination took to blackmailing me to write this and from now on every poem for NaPoWriMo.


MY HAPPY ENDING

 

You walked away, leaving me numb,

And my heart will never breakeven,

With your every word and action you stung,

You gave me pain and took your freedom.

 

I dared you to move, you moved away,

I dared you to truth, only lies you said,

I dared you to happiness only pain you gave,

I dared you to trust, never looked me in the eye instead.

 

 I am all alone, where is My Happy Ending,

 I was hanging by a moment, which you just tore apart,

You left me with no hope, faith, love or pretending,

You were my angel, how could you break my heart?

 

(The songs in that I used are Numb by Linkin Park, Breakeven by The Script,  I dare you to move by Switchfoot, My happy ending by Mika and Hanging by a moment by Lifehouse. Also by complete unintentional occurrence we have Freedom by George Michael and Angel by Shaggy)


Listed below are my fellow NaPoWriMo Participants –

http://njsays.wordpress.com/ – Nirmal

http://juztamom.blogspot.in/ – Sfurti

http://janakinagraj.com/  – Janaki

http://poojashridhar.blogspot.in/ – Pooja

http://andiwrite.com/ – count

http://whilethecoffeebrews.blogspot.in/ –  Naina

http://ponderingtwo.blogspot.in/ – Rohan

http://advkaranshah.blogspot.in/ – Karan

http://www.rinzurajan.blogspot.in/ – Rinzu

http://artofleo.wordpress.com/blog/ – Vinay

http://eccentriccontemplations.wordpress.com/  – Nithya

http://viewsofpreethib.wordpress.com/ – Preeti

About Jaibala

Academically a Microbiologist, I am a Web Columnist for popular magazines and websites, Freelance Writer and a Blogger. Words define me and writing and reading compete to be the love of my life. My biggest belief is that there is something good in everything and I always looks to highlight the best in things. Creative writing is my forte.You can reach me by dropping a mail at contact@jaibalarao.com

21 Comments

  1. The first two songs that you chose… certainly my favorites, especially Numb. It’s perhaps THE song which I most relate to.

    1. Well You know that is one of my absolute favourites too. 😀

  2. Perfect one to describe a heartbreak 🙂

  3. Love the way you weaved song titles into an equally beautiful poem 🙂

    1. Thank You Rohan. Tried really hard. Am just glad everyone liked it 🙂

  4. That’s beautiful. It is so gracefully created… And it shows the heartbreak. I love it with each passing line. I dared you to move, you moved away, loved this line more.be

    1. Fathima thank you 🙂

  5. All the songs somehow made up such a perfect heartbreaking medley. Talent!

    1. Ah Naina thank you so much 🙂

    1. Thanks Janaki 🙂

  6. Awesome Jai..beautifully weaved!

    1. Thank You Sfurti 🙂

  7. I can feel the pain in the poem. Beautiful!

    1. Thanks Pooja…Yes I wanted to show the pain that She is feeling on having tried hard to make the relationship work 🙂

  8. Awesome write jai & song selection too… 🙂

    1. Thanks Preethi 🙂

  9. Lovely poem and a great collection of songs here. enjoyed reading your poem.

    1. Thank You 🙂

  10. y am i getting the thought that these songs were all too related?? 😛 Poem is darn good lady!!!

    1. Well that is my play list right now…thankeeeee *grinning from ear to ear just like you* 🙂

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