NaPoWriMo: What I Seek

Jaibala/ April 16, 2014/ Poetry/ 12 comments

The Prompt for NaPoWriMo today was, “Today, I challenge you to write a poem in terza rima. This form was invented by Dante, and used in The Divine Comedy. It consists of three-line stanzas, with a “chained” rhyme scheme. The first stanza is ABA, the second is BCB, the third is CDC, and so on. No particular meter is necessary, but English poets have tended to default to iambic pentameter (iambic pentameter is like the Microsoft Windows of English poetry). One common way of ending a terza rima poem is with a single line standing on its own, rhyming with the middle line of the preceding three-line stanza.

Here’s a short example of a fairly contemporary poem in terza rima:

Parable

I read how Quixote in his random ride
Came to a crossing once, and lest he lose
The purity of chance, would not decide

Whither to fare, but wished his horse to choose.
For glory lay wherever he might turn.
His head was light with pride, his horse’s shoes

Were heavy, and he headed for the barn.

– Richard Wilbur

Happy writing!”

So once again I am attempting a form that I never have before.


WHAT I SEEK

I cant pretend to be always strong,

For there are moments I am weak,

Being sad sometimes isn’t wrong,

 

It is not just happiness I seek,

Its not only fulfillment I want,

And I am not timid, I am not meek,

 

Sometimes memories haunt,

And your words break my heart,

Don’t want to take it anymore, I cant,

 

I want solace and peace for a start,

I want It at any cost, by any means,

Its not only sweet, I also like the tart,

 

Whatever may have happened, whatever has been,

I just seek the freedom to peruse my dreams.

 


 

Listed below are my fellow NaPoWriMo Participants –

http://njsays.wordpress.com/ – Nirmal

http://juztamom.blogspot.in/ – Sfurti

http://janakinagraj.com/  – Janaki

http://poojashridhar.blogspot.in/ – Pooja

http://andiwrite.com/ – count

http://whilethecoffeebrews.blogspot.in/ –  Naina

http://ponderingtwo.blogspot.in/ – Rohan

http://advkaranshah.blogspot.in/ – Karan

http://www.rinzurajan.blogspot.in/ – Rinzu

http://artofleo.wordpress.com/blog/ – Vinay

http://eccentriccontemplations.wordpress.com/  – Nithya

http://viewsofpreethib.wordpress.com/ – Preeti

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About Jaibala

Academically a Microbiologist, I am a Web Columnist for popular magazines and websites, Freelance Writer and a Blogger. Words define me and writing and reading compete to be the love of my life. My biggest belief is that there is something good in everything and I always looks to highlight the best in things. Creative writing is my forte.You can reach me by dropping a mail at contact@jaibalarao.com

12 Comments

  1. well, it’s not wrong to be sad, just would be better if you didn’t hold on to it for long coz others are standing in your way. it’s your dream, so pursue it as you feel right 🙂 the dream will come to you.

    1. Yes, I figured you need to go after what you want, no one might understand that but you do. 🙂

  2. I ain’t letting you let go of your dream 🙂

  3. Go forth and seek your dreams…the world is your oyster.

    1. Thank You Janaki 🙂

  4. May you be successful in fulfilling your dreams Jai. Beautiful poem!

    1. Thank You Pooja 🙂

    1. Thanks Sfurti 🙂

  5. Awesome, beautiful write Jai… *Hugs*. <3

    1. Thanks Preethi 🙂 *hugs back*

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