Pieces Of A Whole…..

Jaibala/ January 4, 2015/ Poetry/ 28 comments

This post has been published by me as a part of the Blog-a-Ton 50; the fiftieth edition of the online marathon of Bloggers; where we decide and we write. In association with ​Soulmates: Love without ownership by Vinit K Bansal. To be part of the next edition, visit and start following Blog-a-Ton.

 

Parts of a whole,
Scattered around,
Lifetimes spent,
Waiting to be found,

Deeper understanding,
A moments connection,
A piece suddenly found,
In this life’s commotion,

A friend, a beloved,
A sister, or brother,
Someone is everyone,
Nothing’s a bother,

Conversations fly time,
Happiness fills hearts,
A moment away seems,
Like eons apart,

Words are not needed,
Never anger or hate,
Nothing can break them,
Not destiny, nor fate,

Pieces of a whole,
Strewn apart,
Pieces of a world,
Never apart.

 

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About Jaibala

Academically a Microbiologist, I am a Web Columnist for popular magazines and websites, Freelance Writer and a Blogger. Words define me and writing and reading compete to be the love of my life. My biggest belief is that there is something good in everything and I always looks to highlight the best in things. Creative writing is my forte.You can reach me by dropping a mail at contact@jaibalarao.com

28 Comments

  1. Simple and very beautiful! πŸ™‚

    1. Thanks Simran πŸ™‚

  2. Respect!
    My cheer definitely for this one.

    1. Thank You Shri. I am so glad to know you liked this πŸ™‚

  3. I loved your poem for its simplicity. Its lovely:D
    All the best.

    1. Thank You. πŸ˜€

  4. sums up the prompt perfectly!! lovely lines…esp. Pieces of a whole,Strewn apart,Pieces of a world,Never apart. loved it!

    1. I am so glad you liked it πŸ™‚

  5. That was beautiful Jai! πŸ™‚
    and yes, Blog layout is pretty cool too! πŸ™‚

  6. a poem aptly defining soulmates, one of the most suitable poem for this contest

    My Blogaton#50 post Soulmates

    1. Thanks a lot Cifar πŸ™‚

    1. Thank You πŸ™‚

  7. Beautifully written!

  8. Very beautifully written. I really loved the lines
    “Conversations fly time,
    Happiness fills hearts,
    A moment away seems,
    Like eons apart,”

    All the best for BAT!

    Regards,
    Khushboo

    1. Thank You Kushboo. Good Luck to you too πŸ™‚

  9. I really liked the poem, specially for the feel and innocence it resonates!
    All the best for BAT50 πŸ™‚

    Regards,
    Megha

    1. Thank You Megha. All the Best to you too πŸ™‚

  10. It is very nice, like Sid says, but I know you can do much better than this for this prompt πŸ™‚ I liked this for sure. Especially that second verse.

    1. Well, I am glad you liked it then. As far as doing better, well always scope for improvement especially when it come to me and the judge is you πŸ˜›

  11. Beautiful. Like always. πŸ™‚

    1. Thank You Fathi πŸ™‚

  12. Very nice. Very nice, indeed. I also like your new blog layout. Makes reading a lot easier.

    1. Thank You Sid. Also glad that you like the new layout.

  13. Lovely words Jai.
    Deeper understanding,
    A moments connection,
    A piece suddenly found,
    In this life’s commotion,
    … a piece suddenly found ..I could resonate wit this line so well. Hopefully, have found the right piece… Like you have done πŸ™‚

    1. Thank You Ina for the kind words.

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