The Vow

Jaibala/ May 21, 2014/ Short Stories/ 10 comments

Kneeling down on one knee, he asked the question, “Will you marry me?”

She said, “Yes, I will!”

Slipping the ring on her finger, he looked up and was greeted by the most beautiful smiling eyes.

He made a vow to himself then and there, to never let that smile leave her eyes.


About Jaibala

Academically a Microbiologist, I am a Web Columnist for popular magazines and websites, Freelance Writer and a Blogger. Words define me and writing and reading compete to be the love of my life. My biggest belief is that there is something good in everything and I always looks to highlight the best in things. Creative writing is my forte.You can reach me by dropping a mail at


  1. So so beautiful…. If only all men are like that…

    1. True. We can always wish though Fathi and hope. 🙂

  2. Short. Simple. Sweet. 🙂 🙂

    1. 🙂 Thanks NJ

  3. life becomes so meaningful if those simple things are done right <3 🙂

    I have different takes on this, may be you like:


    1. True its the simple things that matter. People make things so complicated 🙂

  4. God bless them both .. and heres to the both of them and to all the smiles they gonna share ..

    1. Yeah. Thanks Bikramjit. They will share a lot of smiles 🙂

  5. Loved it 🙂 No other words!

    1. You made my day. 🙂

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