When I Meet Her…

Jaibala/ January 22, 2016/ Uncategorized/ 18 comments

Retracing that path beckoned

When my world turned grey

A few years, so many seconds

To find whatever I may

When my world turned grey,

To meet the one, I decide,

To find whatever I may,

Behind nothingness I hide

To meet the one, I decide,

She is the one that matters

Behind nothingness I hide,

Every mask now shatters

She is the one that matters,

The one who knows me

Every mask now shatters

Now I can be free

The one who knows me

She loves unconditionally

Now I can be free

She shines so brilliantly

She loves unconditionally,

Whatever it takes

She shines so brilliantly

Everything better it makes

Whatever it takes,

A few years, so many seconds

Everything better it makes

Retracing that path beckoned

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About Jaibala

Academically a Microbiologist, I am a Web Columnist for popular magazines and websites, Freelance Writer and a Blogger. Words define me and writing and reading compete to be the love of my life. My biggest belief is that there is something good in everything and I always looks to highlight the best in things. Creative writing is my forte.You can reach me by dropping a mail at contact@jaibalarao.com

18 Comments

  1. The journey of self-discovery is never-ending isn’t it? 🙂
    another beautiful piece of poetry Jai. you have woven the words so seamlessly 🙂
    Pixie recently posted…Day 17 – roti shapes and sizes.My Profile

    1. yes, never ending. Everytime you meet yourself, you find something new. Thanks Pix 🙂

  2. Beautifully written Jaibala. To be able to put your thoughts down so poetically is pretty magical.

    1. Thanks Tulika. Poetry is just an extension of me I guess. It just happens.

  3. Beautifuly penned, Jaibala! And the quote supports the theme! 🙂

    1. Thanks Shalini 🙂

  4. To thine own self be true! Lovely and honest words of self-realization. Tres Bien!
    Kala Ravi recently posted…A Change of HeartMy Profile

    1. Thank you so much Kala

  5. love the quote and your lines… they are perfect! 🙂
    Archana Kapoor recently posted…And I finally adjusted my watchMy Profile

    1. Thank You so much Archana 🙂

  6. Searching …Finding ….Beautiful.

    1. Thanks So much Poornima. We wont find until we search and we wont search until we find. A full Circle.

  7. No one understands us better than we ourselves, and like the form went back to older lines, we go back to ourselves when we most need it. The journey of self discovery, as Sid puts it. Beautiful.
    Vins recently posted…Holding onMy Profile

    1. You know how much I love this form of poetry. And this was the perfect thing to be said, because the form goes back to the older lines. The journey never ends, it is a cycle.

  8. Wow.. i love the way you have structured the poem and it goes back and circles the first line again. Beautiful search for yourself.

    1. This is what this form lent itself to. A full circle. Thank You So much 🙂

  9. You know me..poetry is not really my cup of tea.
    I’m assuming that the ‘she’ here is like your inner self?
    I guess, that’s the only person you need to be true to – yourself. And the one who can really set you free.

    Good luck on this journey of self discovery.
    Sid recently posted…Me time : When’s yours?My Profile

    1. Thank You Sid. You know me though, I know stuff and still don’t follow it.

      PS: And yes you got it right. So I take that as a compliment 😉

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