You Are Perfect Mom

Jaibala/ May 23, 2014/ Poetry/ 6 comments

When work gets all messed up,

And all things go wrong,

When your every move is looked at,

As if it was colony of wasps,

They put you down,

They’ll say you are wrong,

For one question,

Ten different answers arise,

You never get help,

Only loads of advice,

They’ll say you can never be right,

And judge every little move you make,

Well those people don’t matter,

Every one of them is wrong,

Cause the only opinion that counts,

The only one that can be right,

The only one you should care about,

Are in those two big eyes,

Those soft kisses attest to the truth,

The one they keep repeating on loop,

You are perfect –  MOM


About Jaibala

Academically a Microbiologist, I am a Web Columnist for popular magazines and websites, Freelance Writer and a Blogger. Words define me and writing and reading compete to be the love of my life. My biggest belief is that there is something good in everything and I always looks to highlight the best in things. Creative writing is my forte.You can reach me by dropping a mail at


  1. From S, to Jai, with love 🙂 Especially the last line.

  2. Beautiful poem and so true!

    1. Thank you and coming from a Mom totally humbled 🙂

  3. Loved the last lines yes why bother about those people..
    It’s those two big eyes..The repeating on loop.. MOM ..that matters the most always

    Beautiful poem..

    1. Thank You. I am glad you liked it. 🙂

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